Friday 25 November 2011

#34 The Red Cloak First Draft

I have now completed the first draft for my film, The Red Cloak. Below is my film as it currently is, without sound and with still some tweaks to make to it. I am very happy with it and look forward to finishing my second draft as I am very interested to compare the improvements, and see what works and what didn't. I have also attached my original first draft of my film before I made changes to actresses used.

First Draft:


Original First Draft:

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